The Fire Beneath the Ridge

Wednesday, October 22, 2025

                                                        It took Jay forty-five minutes of climbing to reach the top of Malalag Ridge. The path wound through thick grass and patches of pine, steep in some places and silent except for the rustle of leaves underfoot. The air was cool, sharp with the scent of earth and moss. Every few minutes, he would stop to catch his breath and glance behind him—the village far below, the river like a silver thread, the world growing smaller with every step upward.


By the time he reached the clearing, the sun had already begun to fall. The sky stretched wide and dim, turning the clouds into streaks of gold and gray. He dropped his backpack onto the ground and stood still for a moment, breathing in the quiet.


It was the kind of silence he had been longing for—not the silence of loneliness, but the kind that listens.


He set up his small tent near a cluster of trees, then gathered a few fallen branches to build a fire. When the first spark caught, the flames leapt eagerly to life, orange light dancing against the deepening blue of the ridge.


Jay sat down, arms wrapped around his knees, staring into the fire. Each flicker of flame felt alive—familiar, almost comforting. The warmth crept toward him slowly, seeping into his tired bones.


For months, he had lived with a quiet ache—a hunger that no routine or laughter could fill. Friends had grown distant, relationships faded, and his days had become mechanical. He wasn’t exactly sad, but hollow. Coming here, to the ridge, felt like a way to breathe again.


Then a voice came from behind him.


“You built a fine fire.”


Jay turned sharply. Standing a few meters away was a man—tall, with tousled hair and eyes that caught the reflection of the flames. His expression was calm, but there was a shadow of tiredness beneath his smile.


“Didn’t mean to startle you,” the man said. “I was passing by and saw the firelight. Mind if I join?”


Jay hesitated for only a second, then nodded. “Sure. There’s plenty of room.”


The stranger stepped closer and extended his hand. “Marco.”


“Jay.”


Marco sat across the fire, laying his small pack beside him. For a moment, neither of them spoke. The night deepened, and the fire crackled softly between them, glowing against their faces.


It was Marco who spoke first. “Beautiful place. Quiet. Like it’s waiting for something.”


Jay smiled faintly. “Or maybe it’s just tired of people.”


Marco laughed under his breath. “You sound like someone who understands that kind of tired.”


Jay looked at him. “Maybe I do.”


And somehow, that was all it took. The distance between them dissolved. They began to talk—about simple things at first, then about deeper ones. Marco spoke of travels through towns and forests, of sleeping under the stars, of never staying long enough for anyone to remember his name. Jay shared his restlessness, the weight of feeling unseen, and the strange comfort of solitude.


As they talked, the night grew colder. The fire’s light shimmered on their faces, turning the air around them warm and gold. The wind brushed past, carrying the scent of pine and smoke.


Jay rubbed his hands together, exhaling a white mist. “It’s colder than I thought it’d be up here.”


Marco leaned slightly closer. “Then stay near the fire. Or…”—he paused, his eyes steady—“we could keep each other warm.”


The silence that followed wasn’t awkward; it was heavy, intimate. The fire crackled louder as if it, too, listened. Marco’s hand reached out slowly, his fingers brushing Jay’s arm—hesitant, searching, then sure.


The world outside the firelight disappeared. The stars seemed to bend closer, the wind quieted, and all that remained was the rhythm of breath, the closeness of skin, the heartbeat of two lonely souls who had found each other at the edge of the world.


Time blurred. There were no words left to say, only warmth shared in the cold, only presence in a life that had known too much absence. For one night, Jay felt human again. Alive. Wanted.


When he finally drifted to sleep, the fire still burned faintly beside them, and Marco’s quiet breathing was the last sound he heard.


Morning came softly. The first light of dawn crept across the ridge, painting the grass in shades of silver and gold. Jay stirred, blinking against the pale light, expecting to find Marco beside him.


But he was alone.


The blanket next to him was cold. The space where Marco had been was empty—no footprints, no pack, not even the faintest sign of another soul. The fire had died completely, leaving only a circle of ash.


Jay stood up and looked around, calling out, “Marco?”


His voice echoed once, then vanished into the air. Nothing answered.


A shiver ran down his spine. It didn’t make sense. He remembered everything—the warmth, the laughter, the touch. It had been real. It had to be real.


And yet, as he looked down at the fire pit, something caught his eye: a small mark in the dirt, faint and uneven, like someone had traced it with a finger. It wasn’t a word, just a swirl, a shape that reminded him of a flame.


The wind stirred, cool and soft against his ear. And then he heard it—a whisper, distant but clear:

 

“You needed warmth, so I came.”


Jay froze. The world seemed to tilt slightly, and his chest tightened. He looked around, half expecting to see Marco standing there again, smiling that quiet smile. But there was only the sky, the ridge, and the rising sun.


Maybe Marco had never been real. Maybe he was just the mountain’s way of answering Jay’s loneliness—a spirit, a dream, or something conjured by the aching human need to be held.


Jay sat down again beside the ashes, his hands trembling slightly. Then, slowly, a smile curved across his face.


Real or not, Marco had given him what he needed—a night of warmth, a reminder that he could still feel.


As the sun climbed higher over Malalag Ridge, Jay packed his things and looked back one last time. The fire pit was gray and lifeless, yet something deep within him still burned softly.


He whispered, almost to himself,

“Thank you, Marco.”


Then he began the slow hike back down the mountain—heart heavier, but strangely full.

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